It is a pity you haven't developed your comment for the last advert because your comments overall are really sharp and show a growing knowledge of how Media works. I like the way you have done a comparison between all three of the adverts. this is Merit/Distinction border and would be distinction level if you could add a bit more to the 'car door' advert.
If you update this, upload it to a new post and make it clear that it is an updated version.
It is a pity you haven't developed your comment for the last advert because your comments overall are really sharp and show a growing knowledge of how Media works. I like the way you have done a comparison between all three of the adverts. this is Merit/Distinction border and would be distinction level if you could add a bit more to the 'car door' advert.
ReplyDeleteIf you update this, upload it to a new post and make it clear that it is an updated version.